Crimson Sun: Shards of the End
Crimson Sun: Shards of the End
The first warning came one morning. Clouds hung low, dark red, like spilled paint above the dead city. Kei stood on the cracked school roof, hunched in a threadbare jacket. He watched sunlight leak through gaps in the blotched sky. Could you face your own end if each day felt tired and slow?
Nobody came to class. Silence filled the halls. Windows broke. Crows the size of children pecked at what was left of bags, hoping for some food. Kei stepped over wet feathers. Three streets down, he heard a crash then a crush of glass. His knuckles shook, but his pocket radio stayed dead.
You’d think you’d be scared, right? The city fell apart only days ago. The first crack in the sky opened Friday. Mom? Gone. Dad? Hadn’t come home after his night shift at the plant. Kei rolled empty soda cans from the classroom altar, staring through the glass. What remained down below? Neon sewer smoke. Jewelry ads where ghost shapes lingered. Not much else was left.
Hana, who worked the station cafe before it all fell, crossed his path. Her arm was bandaged—gnawed by something foul, human or not, she didn’t say. She whispered, “I heard they’re coming. Tonight. If you don’t hide, Keichi…”
But neither ran. With days short and nights filled with odd birdcalls, options faded. Hina, an old friend, leaned into their sad plans: “Just survive one more night.” Her backpack clattered, bottles and dream journals filling every inch. Kei looked at Hana. Did any of them think they’d wake up again?
Conflict setup
The Sun’s strange light turned the streets ugly and harsh. It drew out skinwalkers, shadow children, skinless dogs that ushered dusk. Some listen for voices by broken swings in ruined parks. Kei checked alley after alley for signs his family left him some trail—or that haunt they never told him still needed closing. Are they out there, hiding in a safe patch of city? Would you keep hunting when the odds broke down?
This night, reaching the station gates meant hope. Riko, old track captain, claims the Sky Shard fell beyond Endori River. Rumour said you could wish away the burning clouds if you reached it. But Riko’s hand bled green—infected, slow, letting stories seep out. Did anyone trust her tape-bound maps?
What held them together? Maybe just raw nerves. Even when the street lamps died before they could run and weird shrills came from garbage in the drains, none broke. Kei said, “Stay with me. No lone runs. Deal?” Hana snorted. “You’re not the boss just cuz you haven’t cracked yet.”
Development
Past serpent-shaped vending machines, with light flickering and skittering animals hiding in stains, they marched on. Each empty lot, every live wire, each flailing lost shape—another gamble for breath and body. Hina nearly lost her last sock taking poison nails out of a fence. Hana flung shards of taped glass at crawling things. Kei threw a pipe at shadows, missing more than he hit. Listen, everyone bends when pressed. Wouldn’t you?
Stories stuck in Kei’s mind. Dad’s favorite saying: The city’s wheels never quit. Now? Wheels rusted; streets spoke dead sayings. Near a bridge border, gaunt men called, “Over here! Crew tags! …Join us!” Kei waved his stick, ready. Hina hissed, “Don’t trust street dwellers. Some bit into people, never looking twice.”
Wind picked up, singing with glass and ozone. The station lay ahead—a coughing, steaming behemoth built of bent metal shelter and bricks, streaked with red stains. Kei flicked his flashlight on the sign: Endori Station Terminal B. Half the writing was torn. Did all apocalypse stories start with flickering hope?
But across the lawn, something moved. Slow steps scraped concrete. Trucks with broken lights pointed at the team. A noise like a sad piano echoed:
“Stay still,” whispered Hana. Her lips chapped. Kei frowned. “Think that’s one of them?” She squeezed the crowbar, face warped. 
That figure was odd. Half in their world, half leaking shadows. Blood trailed like oil underfoot. Hana trembled, inches from contesting it. In one gasp, Hina shot her burden of broken school ruler—a useless show, but brave all the same. The shadow lurched instead of running off. A phrase shuddered through its ruined lips: “Join the herd. Sky’s breaking.” What’s more real, hope or dread?
The group paused. Lightning forked above, without a sound. Kei barked, “Down! Doors! Now!” Hina cartwheeled behind bushes. Two trucks blasted horns at shadows. Hana fenced off an endless row of creeping pale arms with cold steel. Breathing quickened; hearts beat, or so they hoped. Kei dove, gripping a wooden badge—his soccer pin, useless against beasts.
Crows scattered above, but left one token: half a note, stuck in wheels. Kei snagged it between scrambling feet. “If you want life, break before dawn. Shelter is off world, beyond gates.” Whose script dotted paper brown with care? Mom’s?
Cliffhanger
Creaks and howls pressed from every corner. Riko spit blood; she wove signal flags from stolen cables. Hana whistled, drawing jittery walkers to her stone trap. Kei opened Endori Station’s back panel—metal screaming in dead noon heat. What shimmered inside nearly undid him. Pulse-red glass, forming the city inside, with tiny shadows dollying along brick streets.
An eye blinked within the glass. Echoes chased down spines. “We’re out of time!” Kei pulled at Hina and Riko, so the last few groaned toward the platform. Was survival a win, or just a weird duty?
A pier smashing through rotten floor broke close to Hana’s boots. From a steaming fissure crawled a second form, pale smoke-eyed and crawling, long as the staircase. It croaked Kei’s name with three voices fighting for sound: his father’s, his mother’s, then not at all. Hana wailed. Hina choked back bile.
As backlash flashed white off the glass heart within Endori’s old chest, the city’s horizon split with silver claws. Kei forced a gasp out. Had dawn arrived, or was this only an end opening wide as a wound? Are you bracing or would you run? 